All Comments on 'Winter Track Shower'

Very good story like the scene with the three of them just showering together in the locker room as though theres nothing unusal about that.

The story, the spelling, all crap.

Need to work on the spelling errors, and the second sex scene felt rushed, so some better pacing is in order too. Would like a continuation between these three, but with longer chapters. Maybe 4 pages at least for the next installment. Anyways, not a bad, and definitely hot first time tale.

I wish it had worked like that! Instead I got screamed out of the room when they realized I was a guy.

I actually thought the second story was really quite erotic.

😊

It’s great that your characters felt so comfortable around each other while not having any clothes on. Maybe that’s just how high school athletes are today, but it was not the way they were back in my day. Great storyline too. Thanks!

The first part was exciting, the second sex , a little contrived, too unlikely