by oldnavy1331
Gave it 3 stars. The story was well written; spelling, punctuation, etc. spot on. The plot was thin, the story not really interesting and very little erotica.
Excellent.......would be nice to have a second story part where the families would also take part in their relationship.
Enjoyed immensely.
This started as being written in telling a story but changed as though it was written to be a script for a story.