All Comments on 'Winter Whispers: A Heartfelt Tale'

by oldnavy1331

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DaddysgirlflDaddysgirlfl6 months ago

Nicely done! Looking forward to more!!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Gave it 3 stars. The story was well written; spelling, punctuation, etc. spot on. The plot was thin, the story not really interesting and very little erotica.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Excellent.......would be nice to have a second story part where the families would also take part in their relationship.

Enjoyed immensely.

oldnavy1331oldnavy13316 months agoAuthor

thanks a lot DG! As always, you are generous with your praise!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This started as being written in telling a story but changed as though it was written to be a script for a story.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Out standing... please continue with your writing.."5+'

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Did the author use AI to write this?

wwaldripwwaldrip5 months ago

Excellent story really enjoyed reading it and would love to read more

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