All Comments on 'Wiring Problems'

Definitely a well written story, I wish I knew a place like that around here.

Well written and fun and playful. Great story! I just wish my co-workers would fuck me too. I work in IT.

What a fun story! I really like the tone that was kept throughout the story ... playful, fun and entrancing (not to mention very hot). Thanks for your efforts and keep writting.

...and totaly hot.. a great romp! thank you

Excellent light fun entertainment, didnt turn dark or ominous, even with the Wife got involved. It had the feel of a extremly erotic Romantic Comedy

A good story although I did find it a little long. I know you can't submit chapters for a contest. Good luck.

This is a HOT but totally fantastic and funny SEX FANTASY. Boy! Contract electricians have got the voltage. The guy is the SUPERMAX STUD some idiots claim to be. And it's just silly that this many gorgeous sexpots would get him wet and drained in 36 hours' time. Cum, sweat and juices are dripping all over the place. No one man in all of God's green earth would be up to the amount of hot and happy sex our hero gets, so just keep laughing. Sex is ridiculous fun, ain't it?

I was done after the wife got the load in the face from the delivery boy. I tried to keep up with blowing a load every time he did but he was a better man than me. Quite the story & great fun.

I can't believe some people's comments that it was to long, short attention span I guess - must watch to much TV. I thought it could have been a little longer, complete his discussion with his wife, including her agreeing to help him finish the job as long as she can play with the girls too. Home make up sex afterbeing semi estranged for so long, maybe they can even invite one of the girls over as a dating interest for to two of them. Anyway, I liked the story, alot.

That has got to be one of the best stories I have read here on Lit. You not only stimulated my senses but my entire body. It will take me some time to come down from this high you've given me.

That was beyond erotic! I'm soaking wet and have been playing with my pussy the whole time. Now I'm horny as hell! Thanks for the fun.

I agree with desire. It was super hot. I was hard the entire story. I wonder if there is a store like that. Haha

You out did yourself with this one.

Great story and very well told.

Can hardly wait for the next one.

your story has made my pussy nice and wet,i am soo horny now time to get out the big dildo and ride it till i squirt over and over.

damn.... that was great.... can't wait till 'next' year... ;)

For me you got it right that time - completely -

The wife screwed up - and learned - he did too but he did try - so both weak she had less integrity , but every one won!.

well done -

Read it over 2 sessions. Now goinng to check out your other writings.

A damned good story, well told.

HP

if he can hold out for wireless.com. TK U MLJ LV NV

WOW

I enjiyed the teasing the nudity and the sex

Great descriptions and brilliant story all round

I think this is well written (with the exception of a few typos), a fantastic story line, and an intruiguing amount of detail and variety. Good job!

I spent some time doing tech work, rewiring offices, putting in new servers and replacing work stations but never had anything like this happen though in one big real estate office there was nothing but young pretty women who did a lot of flirting.

Maybe if I'd stayed with it longer though I don't think they recognized national nude day there.

It was a very good story and you did a good job of telling it except for the grammatical errors already mentioned. I'd suggest a proofreader or editor for your work. I know there are people on here who would do that at no charge because I do some now for a few special people.

Keep up the good work. ;-)

Awhile back when I started I use to setup offices like this, pulling wires, setting up servers, unfortunately nothing like this ever happened to me, would've been a fantasy come true lol...

"Oh don't worry, nude day only comes once a year." My wife said.

Does she plan to be a prude for the year ahead?

Not a single ass fuck though, kind of unrealistic.

Erotic and very enjoyable in total.

Liked this a lot! Though I must admit I'd have liked it even better without his wife...

It was a bit unpolished in places, could do with a bit more proofreading, but wasn't too bad.

And anonymous, "Not a single ass fuck though, kind of unrealistic." Are you being sarcastic? If not, I guess you must have real life confused with a porn film. Millions of people in this world don't have anal sex.

And maybe the wife just meant that he wont be having sex with half a dozen women every day until next nude day?

That was a Hell of a story, although I thought the wife's whole he's cheating I'm going to cheat thinking was messed up, not to mention her not having sex with him for quite awhile.

If only... This is a great story. I loved it!

I Love the fact you write that Real women have Hair!!!! and that that can be sexy too!!!!! Great writing!! Story was soooo Hottt.

Abso-fucking great!!