All Comments on 'Wish Come True'

This is my first ever story. I've not done any kind of creative writing outside of school assignments. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

It seems to be one of the top fantasies is to be on a king bed with two hotties. I put myself in the male role as I read, only in my dreams. Sj

Very well written story of every man's dream, watching your wife eat and be eaten by anouther female. When I married my wife already knew that I was a cock whore in any hole. She had actually watched me blow her father and then take his cock up my "pussy". She accepted the fact that I was'nt going to change and so long as I gave my dick to her it was ok.She fingers herself while watching me get some cock. I've begged her to suck some pussy for me and although every now and then she'll give her cunt to some guy she won't do a woman. I truly wish she would.

We both loved your story!