by LootGamingNick
This was a real good way to start the story. You gave the characters history and how things were going on in their life. Not a lot of people will do that and it makes it to where the story is lacking. You did great on how he obtained the item that held the genie in a unique way that I haven't read yet in any other story. Then you leave it to where it's a cliffhanger for the story to start. Like I said not bad for a prologue. Now we need to see how you are going to develop the rest of the story. So far I will give you a 5 star. Keep up the good work.
Thank you all for the positive feedback I am almost done with chapter 01 so it should be getting uploaded soon. I hope to continue on and see what I can do with this story.
I enjoyed reading the 1st chapter of your 1st story in Lit and I look forward to ready more. Thank you for sharing.
Please keep the story going on and finish it.
There are two great genie stories here on lit but both are not finished.
but you need some editting help. I noticed you didn't capitalize Crystal's name once and you used the word "quite" instead of "quiet". A couple of small mistakes but overall a very good start.
I love the genie stories. I wish you continuous good luck to making many many more imaginative chapters. 5/5 *