by Autumn_Hughes
A few minor typos, but very well written. Wonderfully picturesque language, and avoiding the common pitfalls of amateur erotica.
Hey, thank you @Literotica team for posting the updated Prologue. Much appreciated!
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Great opening, well painted characters, well defined back story and believable storyline. You have all the traits of a first class erotic novelist.
Five stars.
Looking forward to reading your next chapter.