All Comments on 'Without You Pt. 03'

by CaroSoft

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
beautiful

this story has had me hooked since the begin it is a beautiful and well written story please keep it going i cannot wait to see where you take it once again BEAUTIFUL...

JPGmvnyJPGmvnyalmost 5 years ago
Nice story

Such a nice story and I look forward to the next step.

MaonaighMaonaighalmost 5 years ago
Good story, pity about the wait...

Having read and enjoyed the first part, I somehow missed the second and so I've read the whole story again. Overall verdict: an enjoyable story. This part seems to finish in an open-ended way, suggesting that there may be more to come. If so, make it soon. Your writing is quite good, CaroSoft, but taking so long between chapters is likely to lose you readers and that would be a shame.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
please dont keep us hanging

i have just finished pt 3 of without you. and just like your other stories I loved it how you really allow your characters to grow,how you don't rush the story.you really know how to write a beautiful story. BUT PLEASE ,PLEASE get around and finish the stories,you are killing us the way they are left unfinished,

YOU ARE A BRILLIANT WRITER KEEP GOING

foxyfowlerfoxyfowleralmost 4 years ago
Perfect

These three stories of yours I have read just now and the way you have let the two lovers find themselves is brilliantly written and cannot wait for the next story(s) as would like to see how close they become and will they marry and be together for life and love this is how I hope they do get there to the alter, it is very real life stories you are a brilliant writer CaroSoft. xxx

Air_DryAir_Dryover 3 years ago

More Please.

That was very nice and your writing is excellent. Thank you!

ramblin2020ramblin2020over 3 years ago

Echo of another comment...PLEASE keep writing more.

Sophie160987Sophie160987over 3 years ago
Unfinished

I love your stories but they feel unfinished

To bad because i for one would love to read more about all your caracters

Hope to read more of you soon but i would ratter read more of your excisting storries then a new one

Thanx

Slurpy29Slurpy29almost 2 years ago

Really enjoyed this series until I figured out it isn’t complete with the last post in 2019. Would enjoyed it so much more if it was finished.

okami1061okami1061over 1 year ago

Leaving us hanging again.

Three years gone is long enough. Get back here and finish these unfinished stories that are headed in good directions.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Without you

When is part 4 coming

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Please please give us part 4!!!.I really want to see if Jenny will ever fully get over herself and whether or not Hannah will start to act her age at last.Please Caro Soft.I am begging you.Give us part 4.

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