All Comments on 'Witness Ch. 04'

Please keep writing. Perhaps Poppy becomes a lawyer and stumbles into a dangerous case... I'm sure you'll come up with something. You always do!

Love to see where this might lead in the future with Poppy, Elliot, and Robert. This is one of those stories you to see have an ending

Another good story, always devour your new work! Will have to go back and reread the whole story shortly.

As usual, another great story. Please revisit your characters, it is always good.

Girl, you are a wonderful writer. As always, another Fantistic story that pulled me in and made me feel all warm and fuzzy in the end. I know we have never met in real life, but I have e mailed you before a few times. So you are a kind of spiritual sister online lol. You have such a knack for writing, I sometimes wonder if you are an author for non erotic books of some kind lol. Be that as it may, I always love reading your stories. They have all invoked feelings of all kinds, suspense, intrigue, excitement, adoration, too many to list really. It will be interesting to see what you come up with next lol. Poppy is a lucky lady after all.

Sincerely Miss Kira Bangkok

As usual Michelle....a great story. Plenty of hot sex and emotional investment of the characters....keep it up and looking forward to your next stories. I hope you continue this story!

I have to take my clothes to the cleaners to remove the snot after crying my way through another of your excellent stories. This is getting expensive but luckily they don’t charge extra for the snot. (Ewww!)

Thank you a fitting end to a delightful story with lovely characters so well drawn and Poppy just adorable, thank you again. Issy

Lovely fairytale, expertly written! Everyone got what she/he deserves, except Lucca Battaglia, the murderer.

Michelle, you are gifted author who consistently delivers wonderful well conceived and crafted stories that are both heartfelt and sexy. It takes real talent to make those characteristics work together. You have made me teary-eyed, and have me imagining what might be possible. Kisses Julia

I have read many stories on Literotica, and this is the best one so far.

Yet another great story from Michele. Please keep them and me coming.