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Sensuous StorytellerSensuous Storytelleralmost 19 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for your comment on my story.

It is one of my earlier pieces and each time I write I do hope I get a little better.

I see your view about how to end it, but I did want to leave you to your imagination.

Please check out my other stories and vote, submit another comment or e-mail me.. I appreciate it all.

rexfelisrexfelisover 19 years ago
Yum!

I really enjoyed that. I'm a redhead lover, and I have enjoyed this fantasy myself a few times. Especially the ending. :) The only thing I'd have done different would be to have walked over and introduced myself...

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It's been over 20 years since I have written many of these stories. I love coming back to see if new readers are stopping by. All comments are welcome.... Thank you for reading my stories. Readers are a writer's dream come true. -Misty-