by Sensuous Storyteller
Thank you for your comment on my story.
It is one of my earlier pieces and each time I write I do hope I get a little better.
I see your view about how to end it, but I did want to leave you to your imagination.
Please check out my other stories and vote, submit another comment or e-mail me.. I appreciate it all.
I really enjoyed that. I'm a redhead lover, and I have enjoyed this fantasy myself a few times. Especially the ending. :) The only thing I'd have done different would be to have walked over and introduced myself...