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Roxanne grinned. She reached down and rubbed Arika's swollen clit, earning a new moan and shudder from the girl.
John frowned.
Roxanne laughed and pulled her hand away. She laid on her side and watched, excited at the prospect of the change going on in the beautiful blond beside her.
John marveled at the strength of Arika's soul. It was powerful like Jennaca's and Artesia's, but different. Not human, certainly, but very similar. Far more than Dargoth's had been. Artesia's had been different too, but John wasn't certain in what way. He had touched her soul and protected it, but it hadn't let him inside. He hadn't gotten to know it.
Arika's was an open book to him. He'd seen all that she'd done and all that she knew by now. She was desperate to join with him. Desperate to become one of his. She needed him to guide her and teach her. And, of course, to pleasure her.
John smiled. When he bound a new woman to him he gave more power than he took. Fortunately Beytrixxa had given him more than enough to spare. In fact, perhaps after this he could try to convince Artesia to join with him at last. Fully. To become his, like the others had.
John smiled and drove himself into Arika a final time. His infernal cum raced into her, blasting into her womb and mixing with her essence and filling her soul with his power. Yes, this was how it was meant to be. Jennaca, Helleen, Roxanne, Arika, and soon Artesia. How could they ever want anything better than this?
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The end! For now. Thank you all for reading and enjoying it. Thank you for your critiques and comments as well. They make me a better write and I welcome them.
As I type this I'm thinking through the greater plot arc I have for John and his ladies and finding lesser plots to challenge, entertain, and titillate. It is my next project, but I expect I'll post some other ones here in the meantime.
- COMMENTS
BigotedeFoca5 months agoAn absolute joy to read, the twists, turns, tears, and hell yes, laughter have been intoxicating. My only complaint is that it’s over. Just can’t seem to find a way to give more than 5 ⭐️s, it sure deserves more. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
Anonymousover 1 year agoLoved the story. A few misspellings, but a good plot. Keep up the good work.
Anonymousover 1 year agoRead the whole series, this was fantastic. So glad I discovered it late, I would have suffered if I'd had to read it a little bit at a time but as one continuous whole man oh man I loved the whole thing. Fantastic, simply fantastic.
dork42about 2 years agoGreat series, as with many "The End?" Oh darn it! Heh, I did notice an oopsie after Arika's monologue. Where Sasha says something. She has growled, roared, and purred before but I don't think she spoke. Most likely it was supposed to be one of the girls. I wholeheartedly agree with Wildwood, some editing catching the auto-fill/spellchecker errors would make this series outstanding!
Wildwood55about 2 years agoYour 'John' saga, so far has been well done, and an engaging pleasure to read. You've found the right balance between advennture/action/a reat story line, and the sexual pleasures, which are part of real life.
You have developed the characters well; I have come to find myself invested in them emotionally, which is the sign of a skilled author, more than 'just' a writer, if you catch my meaning.
Over Winter I had somewhat of a forced hiatus from Literotica after voraciously reading their content daaily since aabout 6 months after the site's launch. I AM one of the old timers lurking around here; engaging, encouraaging and sharing my knowledge & what I learned from nearly 30 years of non-fiction editing and writing in the academic & technical/ DIY/how to worlds created by the Interneet world.
Add this to over 50 years of inhaling Sci Fi/Fan in print form, which is what I have read nearly excclusively for recreational reading; never going more than a day or so without starting a new authorr/ series.
The waiting time between posts of serial Lit submissions is really minimal compared to a lifetime of waiting several years for the next book in a series in the traditional print world.
My semi-forced hiattus was due to recovering from cancer treatment. The docs told me I would be a 'bit tired', and warned me of the possible & likely side effects of radiation and chemo, (Fall 2021 for 7 weeks, after throat surgery in the Summer of 2020, which I was not completely recovered from, when the cancer re-emerged.).
What the docs failed to prepare me for was the timing of the effects of rad/chemo which hit just a few days after my last treatment(s).
It kicked my ass, putting me into a near bedridden state, sapping nearly all of my stamina & energy. This after fairly breezing thru the 7 weeks of daily radiation & weekly chemo.
They also didn't psychologically prepare me for the effect of waiting 12 weeks post- treatments before I underwent CT & PET scans, which are intended to ideniffy if they 'got' the cancer.
It was an experience I would wish on no one; I have an understanding of the devastating impact of depression I never possessed. I would have to look at a calendar & do the math, but I let my iPad sit uncharged for several months with no interest or desire to see if there were no submissions to the 20 odd serials I am currently following.
I re-read a couple of printed series out of sheer boredom during my hiatus from Lit. Even read a completely new series by an author I'd never read, but for the first time in my life I couldn't engage with the characters &/or storyline, and the series I re-read is one of my couple dozen print aeries I have kept on the shelf, and re-read multiple times.
It was interesting, in a post experiential view to compare the writing quality/editing expertise, between what 'published authors' & publishing houses have produced since the 80's & what I have enjoyed for a long time on Lit.
What surprised me the most, I suppose is I found mysellf editing on the fly, as I read the printed word, and finding it necessary, much as I do with Lit submissions, with the major difference being the wide range of necessity for 'editing on the fly' found in Lit submissions.
Your John saga could easily be polished into a manuscript by a professional editor, and become a successful 'print world' series, just not in the US, where we are hamstrung by our Puritanical fooundation and much too long lingering Victorian attitude(s) towards sex.
Far in the future, I can see historians reading popular fiction, and wondering if we ever took a crap, or how we managed to procreate until we have over-populated our planet!
That you for hsaring your talent & imagination. Reconnecting w- Lit, as I have over the past couple of weeks has been both an intellectual indication I am actually recovering, (it is a long slow haul to recover from cancer treatment I never fully integrated into my understanding of the overall affects of the disease.)
Thank you, again, for sharing.
Regards,
GeoD
