All Comments on 'Wolf's Heart'

This story has good bones, it's just rough around the edges. Not sure how to explain it, but to me......it doesn't seem to flow smoothly. Do you have an editor?

This was my first submission i know its rough i plan to work on it sorry about the mistakes i will do better with chapter 2 and i need a good editor i will admit that plz vote and comment thx all

I think that this is good for a first attempt. I enjoyed reading the first chapter. Continue to work on improving your skills and keep on writing. I look forward to following your story.

The flow is a bit too fast.

I look forward to reading more.

Some odd phrasing here and there and it could use some editing, but I look forward to reading more. Don't rush it, make us really understand the characters and the decisions they make.

A nice starting chapter. Looking forward to reading more

i hope that she takes up for micah with the alpha or the alpha sees that her being changed at the request of the siblings was good enough since it saved her life and she is ok with it.i just hope the alpha has a mate or is not going to be an ass and try to take her from micah.

A lil fast in the transitions but otherwise great ....more please

But great. Looking forward to the rest

More soon?

You have an Excellent start of a series , well written and versed . I will look forward to

more to follow . 5 Stars .

Thanks for a great read and am waiting for more SOON !

tx cracker

this is great I can't wait for more

I am working on chapter 2 now i hope it wont take to long to finish but i will post it as soon as it is done and edited thanks for the feed back

only 4 cos i'm really needing to find out who won the mating fight.lol

a great start to an exciting story, i hope the rest of this story is as good as

the start.

please dont keep everyone waiting to long for the following chapter's.

Loved it. Loved it.