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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
IM LIKE MICHEAL JACKSON

this is it no more of the wolves for me don't end it find something else to do wit this storey it was a good read for me

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
Great story

Well done!

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyover 12 years ago
Wonderful read!

From a wonderful author. This seemed more like a peek into someone's life than a work of fiction, and whatever story you decide to grace us with next, I can't wait to read!

SunshineChica73SunshineChica73over 12 years ago

I hope this is the end of this great story, but if it is then I pray you give Dee & Marshall a story of their own, which includes a happy ending with a baby or two.

donaldedonaldeover 12 years ago
love this story

when I first started to read the story i was not sure i would enjoy it I am really not into the group sex thing but the way you wrote the story and made it look like we were getting a peek into their lives caught my interest. I would like to thank you for posting this wonderful story and i hope that you continue on with more chapters and even focus on Dee marshal and the kids. looking forward to mer works from you

sweetie86sweetie86over 12 years ago
***SIMPLY LOVELY***

I LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS WHOLE STORY IT WAS SO GRIPPING I FELT EVERY EMOTION... I FELT LIKE I WAS WATCHING AS THE STORY UNFOLDED!!! GREAT STORY TELLER!!! I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE OF YOUR WORK!!!

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127over 12 years ago
So wonderful.....Snoopy Dance Again

You know I flipped when my internet connection went out while reading this. But here I am just as happy as can be. Everything worked out for the lovely black bbw and her 5 men and family. You wrapped everything in a wonderful bow and I know I'll be re-reading this story over and over again in the near future. Once again I'm doing my Snoopy Dance. Once again thank-you for sharing yourself with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Is this chapter really the end!!!!

It was such a great story. Allie seems like a good friend who is sharing her story with a confidante.

If this is the end, I have truly enjoyed this story. I will miss this family.

A story about Marshall,Deb and the boys would be nice to look forward to in the near future.

vT

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 12 years ago
wonderful

What a wonderful ending to a wonderful story great job

huntersangelhuntersangelover 12 years ago
excellent story kalamazoo!

i'm so glad that i found your stories, you are such a creative and fun writer that i was so happy each time you uploaded a new chapter. and allie's character? she is such a hoot! I mean stuff like this, Oh yippy skippy! and the "let's get the show on the road" comment when she's finally cleared medically and getting ready to make love with matt, were hilarious! matt and the brothers were so lovable, caring and attentive to allie, that they've endeared themselves in my heart.

overall, i really loved this story and i'm sad IF this is the final chapter, but i'm so glad that i found it. NOW, could you, would you please see it in your heart to give us a marshall and dee story????

aggie35aggie35over 12 years ago
WOW!!!

I LOVED the ending!!! I'm so glad that Marshal and Dee ended up together!! Are you planning on doing a sequal for those two?? Just a thjought... But honestly I have to say that you are such a great author! If you were to go to a publisher for any of your stories I'm sure they'd pay you a shit load to print at least one of your stories and I'd make damn sure I bought it lol Keep up the fantastic job!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Thank YOU :)

This has been a wild ride and i've loved every single moment!

FatBottomedGirl

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
A

very beautiful story, even with the killings that seemed to be justified as they were done. Keep up the good writings for us-your readers!!!

Loved it and the happy ending for those in love with one another and karma is real!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story!

what a great story!!! I really came to love these characters! Especially the sassy allie and her hunky men! Please continue to write!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Loved it - NK

Where do I start? I loved every bit of this story. I waited patiently for you to finish it before I read it. I usually don't like reading nonhuman stories, but after reading your first story I was hooked. Thanks for creating wonderful stories. Please hurry and finish your other stories and please create new stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent story!

Five stars for every chapter!

shytxgrlshytxgrlover 12 years ago
More

I too am not into the non-human stories but I loved this one! I do hope there will be a story about Dee and Marshall.

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127over 12 years ago
10 stars

I did my 3rd read and I still can't help but to do my snoopy dance. Ohhh how I love your stories Kalamazoo ( Big cheese smile)...lmao

AcdromanceAcdromancealmost 12 years ago
You got me

I don't normally like polyamourous stories but you managed to draw me in and have me fall in love with all her mates. You are a very good story teller.

MythOFreakMythOFreakalmost 12 years ago

Great story, but I just realized....I have no idea what the men look like. Do they have dark hair? Light hair? Who's lean? Who's more muscular? Not a problem, I just like to visualize while I read, so I couldn't figure out what was wrong until now.

Still, great story, this is my second time reading it :D

shortydeeshortydeealmost 12 years ago
PLEASE!!!!!!!

Please write a story about Dee and the kids. I would like to know how their lives turned out.

mrskelleymrskelleyalmost 12 years ago
Loved it!!!!!!

Beautiful ending!

eroticanewbieeroticanewbiealmost 12 years ago
really the end?

just read this straight through and WOW! that was all kinds of unexpected wonderfulness.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Girlfriend!

I just read the entire series straight thru and again U NEED TO BE PUBLISHED! Real talk! U've got to tell me what happened to Dee & Marshall, did they have their own lil cubs & what about Dees boys? Did they learn of their new fathers bloodline?

I SOOO LOVED THE STORY ... MS SADI

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow what a story.

I stopped everything and read all the way thru, I want to know what happens with Dee and Marshall and the boys too. You need to be published, I'm an avid reader

and I thoroughly enjoyed your story. It has so many wonderful components. Please,

please, please let us know about Dee and Marshall and continue to write.

SashavonbobnbonSashavonbobnbonover 11 years ago
One of my favorite series

So much to live with this story, its actually one of my favs. I love that you know this is a plus sized black woman in the story. Nothing about her looks or ethnicity is ambiguous. I appreciate a strong story where someone like me is reflected. My only disappointment is that it seems the author shied away from e bisexuality of the brothers. I didnt read the comments in the other chapters and there may be a reason for this. However im still bummed about it. I was hoping to see that here. Because that would have been the perfect fantasy in my eyes. I actually told my bfabout this story, and that the main character is living my dream fantasy life. Cute fat black girl with five hit white bi husbands...who are brothers? I almost hate this bitch because i want to be like her so bad! :-D

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Superb! Wonderful story!

What can I say that has not been written by everyone else! Kalamazoo707 You Rock! Keep up the good work. I love the fact that you used a sista that did not understand her true beauty. You made her more real than some women walking around live. You gave us a Beauty with a Booty! Thank You....KittyOh48!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
girl u da bomb

Lol. This is lik my 10th time reading this n it still gets to me. I lov ur work and every person in all of ur stories are all diffenent n thats wht i lov about it. U hav a real gift. I lik writing stories but i will never be as great as u but i hope. Love Alissa

xxstarfish123xxxxstarfish123xxover 11 years ago
MORE!!!!

I would really appreciate it if yu would make an epiloge of something like that. I am quite curious to see what happens next:)

roseloveroseloveabout 11 years ago
i lv this story

Lov it. this is my 10 time reading this. This is my fav story. U r amazing and have millions of fans n im one of them!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
WONDERFUL

I LOVED IT AND THINK IT SHOULD EXPANDED INTO A FULL BOOK. THE SERIES POTENTIAL IS AWESOME. I CAN EVEN VISUALIZE THE BOOK COVER IN MY HEAD. WONDERFUL STORY!!

Stephan10caStephan10caalmost 11 years ago
Excellent

This is an incredible piece of work. As usual,very well done.

NuFreespiritNuFreespiritover 10 years ago
ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!!!!!!

I agree with two of your commenters:

1) An epilogue would REALLY be nice to see! LOL. Heck forget that and give us the next in the series. LOL.

2) This story kept me up all day and night until I finished it. Yep, I think you should be publishing this story. I would CERTAINLY buy it. You would just have to let us know which publishing house you would be using and when it would be coming out.

I mean it, this story was REALLY WONDERFUL.

NuFreespiritNuFreespiritover 10 years ago
BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!

I agree with everyone else. This was very well-written and its a wonderful story. I would simply LOVE to see an epilogue showing us how everyone is doing 3 or 5 years later; do Dee and Marshall have children, and does Allie and the brothers have more children. Also, I think it would make a wonderful book!!. If you do that, you will have to tell us where it will be published so we can purchase a copy.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
Splendid

What can i say, i'm in love with your writing.

FrozenSunFrozenSunover 9 years ago
WOW

I love this story! I couldn't put my kindle down!!! I'm looking forward to reading your stories,both past and future!!!!

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623about 7 years ago
Awesome!!

What a wonderful story! I think you have a wonderful storytelling ability and a great gift with words. I could 'see' everything. Thank you for a great job and story. Please keep writing!!

FrozenSunFrozenSunover 6 years ago

I love this story so much!! I always come back to reread them!! Can't get enough!! I'm hoping you write a "how are they now" type story, it would be AWESOMENESS!!!

AmazonBeauty1966AmazonBeauty1966over 5 years ago
Enthralled

Excellent job! Well written, exciting, action packed and just enough down and dirty to make a reader moist and fidgety. Thank you!!

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