All Comments on 'Woman in Love Ch. 04'

The day of reckoning seems to be getting close.

Finally, I was thinking what happened to Ariel and Wanda.

So we get our first view of the possible evil mastermind pulling the strings. WAAHOOO! ... and is Jeff part of the Rogue SEAL Team?

My guess is one of those reveries was Don figuring out exactly who was trying to be the puppet master.

Who could be that woman at the end of the chapter?

Katherine Woodburn? Dr. Robin Isley? Kelly Carnes? or someone else?

Gee it's his sister isn't it.

So she's back... Wow.

WW, it appears you wrote the wedding earlier than you originally intended based on your last story but it is still good to see this happen at this time . As to the epilogue you have left some clues for your readers,. The name of Jeff has been used in some of your other stories but he has always been a bad guy and always referred to as a member of the rogue aseal team. Remember everyone that ther are always clues to the next adventure of the IRON CROWBAR...

but haste makes waste which is forthcoming while tomorrow is still. another day,,,,,less for some more for others. TK U MLJ LV NV

KWH

Keep them comming

sounds like Lily Hargraves, the widow, enjoying a little sex at the last of the story, her hubby exited the 30th story of Canon building if I remember right !!!!!

maybe I'm just a nervous nelly. It is slightly unusual to not hear something from WW after almost a month. We your reading public hope you are doing well.

Relax, nothing's wrong with me (well, that may be a matter of opinion, but I digress). I've been working on another project, which has slowed down my next IC story. Please have patience, and I hope to get something out soon...

I was just checking and you have even left a note . How very considerate . I will await patiently . It's not as though there is a lack of reading material around here . Good luck on your new project .

The first chapter of the next story, 'Consequences', has been submitted and hopefully will be published sooooon.

Could be a number of women. Think Warner Harlan too young to like sherry so someone older. As a wildcard I wonder if it could be Wellman's wife?

So happy Cindy and Callie are married. Isn’t Jeff ( Lt Bayport) seal team leader. Madam X surally isn’t Lilly Hargreaves because she would be able to afford a house on the hillside. Mostly it’s Karen Harlem who hates IC.

I know you useBettina rooftop 7am telecast to setup that days events BUT doesn’t it ever rain at 7am in T&C. Lol

*****Thanks for sharing.