by Rumspringe
Captures the horror of her change and her dehumanisation but doesnt rely on the standard porn style humiliation scene. Creative- This is a truly masterful work. I would like to see more from this author.
I think nothing is hotter then corruption. This story captures it with expert ease. Most writer jump to the sex early but this story makes your mouth water, while providing entertainment along they way. In the end we see out lovely church girl raped and turned into another mine slut. Once again, well done!
I can't really say as though I liked it, it wasn't a bad story, well written and all. But just gross, I guess the gross part is what landed it here in Erotic Horror.
...and more importantly, hot! Very good work here, and thanks for posting it :-)