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by Saswati

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asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Good first attempt, but...

There are some internal contradictions,

As also a littel jerkiness in the story.

Do find a good editor for yourself!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Ummmm....

MMMMMM.....

Yeah Saswati, keep on writing. I have read all of your fictions and have come really hard each time!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

need to right paragraphs in stead of lines. bring more romance hard fuking

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