by Krevmh
Wow! This was amazing. I love that it wasn't an immediate rush for sex without any build up. I'd be really excited to see a sequel to this as I love the tone at the end with mother and daughter fully submitting to him.
Fantastic plot pacing and realism of characters. The adherence to established patterns and opinions of the characters is also well done. The only thing I would recommend is being more descriptive of the females' sensations during there sexual interludes. A bare bones telling of mechanics doesn't excite the way a video would no matter how detailed that telling is. Please keep this up 5 stars.