All Comments on 'Wonder Woman - The New God(s)'

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watermouse588watermouse588over 2 years ago

what a great story this is

TinyTaraTinyTaraalmost 2 years ago

Wow! This was amazing. I love that it wasn't an immediate rush for sex without any build up. I'd be really excited to see a sequel to this as I love the tone at the end with mother and daughter fully submitting to him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fantastic plot pacing and realism of characters. The adherence to established patterns and opinions of the characters is also well done. The only thing I would recommend is being more descriptive of the females' sensations during there sexual interludes. A bare bones telling of mechanics doesn't excite the way a video would no matter how detailed that telling is. Please keep this up 5 stars.

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