All Comments on 'Woodland Retreat Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing

An amazing story. Will there be another one? If so I look forward to what you will do to keep the dramatic tension. Since Red has seen them, maybe some control games in the city.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Like this chapter better

Having a second woman to experience the retreat added depth to the story. So what will you have them doing until the next retreat?

Mag58Mag58about 3 years ago
Excellent Story

Absolutely wonderful; well written an very, very sexy xx

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...

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