All Comments on 'Words Made Flesh Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
ramp up the eroticism!

This story is a slow burner I know, teasing the reader in yet frustrating as a Domme with full control over her charges. I'd like to see longer chapters that fully explore the relationship,e.g. even more email play where Sophia may be more libidinous given the courage created by being remote from the other two. So come on chapter 4.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
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This story is very good, and I can tell it is building to something very erotic. Please write more soon, this is going to be very hot.

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