by txstanford
Language is what it's about. Her frankness is erotic: you are pulled in very close. It's the way people should interact. Perhaps not strangers, I don't know but wow, very good.
I loved this - the way you sliced straight into the characters' inner workings despite using third person (which is normally a pet hate of mine); the way you conveyed casual little details with such evocative finesse. The serial killer line made me laugh out loud.
You have, as she had, a way with words; favourites or no :)