All Comments on 'Work Out!'

Needs editing

5 Stars from me, I enjoyed it. Yes it could have used some editing, but still very enjoyable.

Thank you for your comment and for be nice about the fact my story really needs a better edition. I read it again after that not as nice firts comment, and definitely I could have done a better writting and edition. The thing is that English isn't my mother tongue, but I hope my writting gets better in my future works. I'm glad you enjoyed this story tho. Thank you again ;)

Enjoyed it.