All Comments on 'Work Out Break Down'

Really good story. I like the detail you put into Rachel's inner monologue. Plus it's amazing what you don't say that just makes it even better.

Well written, enticingly erotic and it makes me want more. And I agree with a previous comment: The plot is adva I’m nced and the story well served by what’s not said in direct terms. There are no numbers given, no penis lengths, no bra sizes no arm in measurements. All of this is implied but without the overt statements of fact it actually entices the reader more.

I hope you will continue the story!