All Comments on 'Work Related'

As usual another great story, i love it, keep on writing,

thank you

I liked the story and the characters. Very well written.

you've amazed me at how you're able to capture such a complete and alluring story in such a short space. Excellent job at capturing your character and her feelings...always looking forward to more!

Thank you for the story. For a short story it had everything. Well done!

Wonderful sensitive story! Excellent development of characters and theme.

Patricia you have great talent. A natural writing style. You gave us a story and capped it with an erotically stimulating finale. Thanks you very much x x x x x

Susan England

... mmmmmmmmmore, please!

Please tell me you plan on continuing this story...what about the ex. These two lovely ladies. So much more I want to know.

Your writing drew me inside this story and kept me. I had to read it all...regardless of what time it was or the errands I have to do.

Please...more of this lady, her friend, and her ex as well.

As always, love, a superb example of how to draw your reader into a realistic scenario, real people. Sexy and believable. The perfect combination. I'll come and play with the buttons on your calculator anytime. Mat xxxx

Great story!!! I wish you would write more.

What a treat for this old voyuer guy! Being with these two women as they progressed up to being back in the hotel....yummy! And, being a fly on the wall as they experienced pantyhose sex...wow! I could hear the nylon singing as they moaned. Good writing!

Real sensitivity here. This is wonderfully erotic and I loved it.

WOW!!!

It's beautiful, loving, incredibly sensuous, and completely captivating.

It was a sexy story, but you could have had more editing. The errors I see are outstanding.

Other than that, great job.

As usual. A wonderful story told by a master story teller. Thank you

A well paced story with a nice wet ending!

Let us read about these lesbian-leaning ladies in a scented sideways 69.

A beautiful story. Thanks

What a great story hope there is more to it . Thanks ☺

A fantastic realistic story!