by patricia51
Let us read about these lesbian-leaning ladies in a scented sideways 69.
As usual. A wonderful story told by a master story teller. Thank you
It was a sexy story, but you could have had more editing. The errors I see are outstanding.
Other than that, great job.
It's beautiful, loving, incredibly sensuous, and completely captivating.
What a treat for this old voyuer guy! Being with these two women as they progressed up to being back in the hotel....yummy! And, being a fly on the wall as they experienced pantyhose sex...wow! I could hear the nylon singing as they moaned. Good writing!
As always, love, a superb example of how to draw your reader into a realistic scenario, real people. Sexy and believable. The perfect combination. I'll come and play with the buttons on your calculator anytime. Mat xxxx
Please tell me you plan on continuing this story...what about the ex. These two lovely ladies. So much more I want to know.
Your writing drew me inside this story and kept me. I had to read it all...regardless of what time it was or the errands I have to do.
Please...more of this lady, her friend, and her ex as well.
Patricia you have great talent. A natural writing style. You gave us a story and capped it with an erotically stimulating finale. Thanks you very much x x x x x
Susan England
Wonderful sensitive story! Excellent development of characters and theme.
Thank you for the story. For a short story it had everything. Well done!
you've amazed me at how you're able to capture such a complete and alluring story in such a short space. Excellent job at capturing your character and her feelings...always looking forward to more!
As usual another great story, i love it, keep on writing,
thank you