All Comments on 'Working Late'

Nice little story. Good buildup, it comes out of nowhere because of catching the other couple. The sex was fun and believable, not porn sex. Just as they got to be voyeurs watching the other couple, the reader gets similar pleasure, kind of like the security guard.

Apart from a few trips with wrong use of 'wasn't' and 'weren't' the writing was excellent, and a very hot story from an admired writer. Thank you.

Your stories all have a nice rhythm, excellent pacing, great characters and are very sexy. The only real nit I have is that Diane is 'wanton', not 'wonton', unless, of course, you intended to compare her to a Chinese dumpling!

I really enjoyed reading your story. I appreciated the effort that went into correct grammar, spelling and punctuation. You have a great story with good build-up and a believable finish. As another commenter said, its not porn star sex, which makes it all the better. I look forward to reading more of your stories.