All Comments on 'Working Late'

by S_Hollister

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
SO worth the read!!!

Wonderful story, well written and engaging. I hope this author keeps posting for a long time to come

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loving

This is one of the nicest, most believable, loving stories I've read in a long time. Well written and so nice. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Awesome!

Such a sweet and amazing story! The only problem I found was that I wish there was more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great work

Excellent story. Love this sort of dynamic (boss as sub) anyway, but this was especially well told and the interaction between the characters was nice and realistic. Full 5 stars from me. Great work.

dyetieddyetiedover 4 years ago
Beautifully written.

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Origin story?

A. Great Story!

B. So how does a high-flying executive end up with a PA as her dom? Inquiring minds want to know!

C. Please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
4 star story

Finally a good lesbian d/s story. I would have given 1 more star if the story was little longer and more sex. Hopefully strap on and little bit of other things like going to Employee bathroom. or the walk but not only in her office. more Risky place.

But overall its a 4 star story and keep writing more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Excellent!

Adult reading without the typical, outlandish nonsense you find in a lot of stories.

Ravey19Ravey19almost 4 years ago
Great

Not much to say. Excellent read. Chapter may be a bit short and some little gremlins to sort out but otherwise good writing skills demonstrated crafting a different relationship

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 3 years ago

Oh! That's incredible. Staggeringly well told. Conventional definitions existing over blinding after-images of undeniable reality.

Wonderful.

Thank you verrrry much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
wonderful!

Characters with realistic thoughts and personalities! can't wait to read more of your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Interesting premise.

But lost me early.

Three stars.

rosepolrosepol3 months ago

Wonderful story, both plausible in the details and sexy in the basics.

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I write dirty stories. Some for my own entertainment, others for people who inspired me in one way or another. My stories will always have a heavily female focus, although I can't guarantee that male characters might not slip in in the future.

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