by blake1
Love this story btw....please tell us Mel is gonna get her crap together!!!! I need my happily ever after!
I just wanted to say, I've been following this story for awhile and I thought of it as this fun kinda goofy story as the protagonist was so utterly oblivious. But you know what? This new chapter completely turned things around for me, and I loved the way you handled her coming out. Excellently done! Yes, I wish things ended a bit differently, but you have set up Mel as being unable to see things in front of her, and I actually enjoyed this turn alot. This is a wonderful story and I'm so glad you are writing it!
Please tell me its not gonna be those sad ending where they part... :( good story tho
Great series. The self-revelations are cool. Coming to terms is tough. Please continue.
xoxo,
Di
This story started off like that gay chicken sketch, and then some how veered off into the main character realizing maybe he is queer and needs
some therapy. Unexpected feels but good as always.
This is one of the most emotionally painful things I’ve read in a while. Great work!
Especially the anon who just said "dumb bitch not a brain in her head" which made me laugh out loud and honestly describes both Mel and me irl perfectly. don't worry y'all this is not the end! the next chapter is just awaiting approval, then there should be one more after that
You have me hooked on their story, please do continue .. of course I hope they do get together :). Thanks for the great work .. TG Tiffany
ah it makes me feel so emotional, so good, ah poor Adam, he is in love!!!
Very nice indeed. Slow romantic build up, and then heartbreak hotel at the end of this chapter. Although therr are 3 more chapters to go. Hope it works out for them.