All Comments on 'Working Out with My Sister'

Great seduction that's not drawn out

Nice read, easy to read, well done.....THANKS

loved this, sexy and not convoluted by too much exposition!

Pls build a plot, be slow to describe each action. It's not porn movie that you need to go directly into fucking. keep some passion. It will be better reading then.

You magically acquired her panties after watching her masturbate, also miraculously, maybe through her closed door, or you floated outside her bedroom window, or maybe you because the size of a drop of water and stuck to the wall of the shower?

Put a little thought into writing. If you don't, it isn't going to be very good, like this story.

The four people that liked it are idiots.

Such immature story telling possibly by a virgin who dreams of fucking his sister

It was rushed with poor explanations on things = shite 1*

Has potential, but it seems to speed along to quickly.

Not bad, but the ending kinda fizzled out…. Personally, I’d loved to read more about them, and how their relationship evolved. And of course, how the fucking raw eventually lead to the first of several pregnancies with her brother.