All Comments on 'Working the Holidays Pt. 03'

Oh I love your stories! This latest one is so hot, so sexy. So well written, too. Also can’t wait for another installment of Full Scholarship, if you’re up for it!

So happy to see this story continued! More plz!

I absolutely love this series! It is sooo hot but also well written.💕

Wow one of the best writers returns. Thanks for keeping it going

so fucking hot, detailed, nice tricked and filmed and blackmailed, please more

This was a great story, I have 2 comments though.

In the story you used dollars instead of pounds, I believe this takes place in the UK (you said London, I suppose that could be a US London, or London Ontario in Canada, but I assume you meant England) (this is an easy fix)

The other is (again assuming this is in England), most young people (in fact nor would most older people) who live in London wouldn't drive a car to a city centre shop.... traffic is mad, parking is expensive and there is an congestion charge... Public transport would be the way of choice. This obviously doesn't need to be changed, as it could happen, just public transport would be more believable, and frankly having to navigate the tube/busses in women's clothes in itself could add to humiliation... so just a thought if you wanted to revisit.

Again I love this series, and frankly would love to hear about the New Years party, I honestly wouldn't have bothered commenting if I didn't like the overall story.

This was a great story, I have 2 comments though.

In the story you used dollars instead of pounds, I believe this takes place in the UK (you said London, I suppose that could be a US London, or London Ontario in Canada, but I assume you meant England) (this is an easy fix)

The other is (again assuming this is in England), most young people (in fact nor would most older people) who live in London wouldn't drive a car to a city centre shop.... traffic is mad, parking is expensive and there is an congestion charge... Public transport would be the way of choice. This obviously doesn't need to be changed, as it could happen, just public transport would be more believable, and frankly having to navigate the tube/busses in women's clothes in itself could add to humiliation... so just a thought if you wanted to revisit.

Again I love this series, and frankly would love to hear about the New Years party, I honestly wouldn't have bothered commenting if I didn't like the overall story.

This was a great story, I have 2 comments though.

In the story you used dollars instead of pounds, I believe this takes place in the UK (you said London, I suppose that could be a US London, or London Ontario in Canada, but I assume you meant England) (this is an easy fix)

The other is (again assuming this is in England), most young people (in fact nor would most older people) who live in London wouldn't drive a car to a city centre shop.... traffic is mad, parking is expensive and there is an congestion charge... Public transport would be the way of choice. This obviously doesn't need to be changed, as it could happen, just public transport would be more believable, and frankly having to navigate the tube/busses in women's clothes in itself could add to humiliation... so just a thought if you wanted to revisit.

Again I love this series, and frankly would love to hear about the New Years party, I honestly wouldn't have bothered commenting if I didn't like the overall story.

This was a great story, I have 2 comments though.

In the story you used dollars instead of pounds, I believe this takes place in the UK (you said London, I suppose that could be a US London, or London Ontario in Canada, but I assume you meant England) (this is an easy fix)

The other is (again assuming this is in England), most young people (in fact nor would most older people) who live in London wouldn't drive a car to a city centre shop.... traffic is mad, parking is expensive and there is an congestion charge... Public transport would be the way of choice. This obviously doesn't need to be changed, as it could happen, just public transport would be more believable, and frankly having to navigate the tube/busses in women's clothes in itself could add to humiliation... so just a thought if you wanted to revisit.

Again I love this series, and frankly would love to hear about the New Years party, I honestly wouldn't have bothered commenting if I didn't like the overall story.

This was a great story, I have 2 comments though.

In the story you used dollars instead of pounds, I believe this takes place in the UK (you said London, I suppose that could be a US London, or London Ontario in Canada, but I assume you meant England) (this is an easy fix)

The other is (again assuming this is in England), most young people (in fact nor would most older people) who live in London wouldn't drive a car to a city centre shop.... traffic is mad, parking is expensive and there is an congestion charge... Public transport would be the way of choice. This obviously doesn't need to be changed, as it could happen, just public transport would be more believable, and frankly having to navigate the tube/busses in women's clothes in itself could add to humiliation... so just a thought if you wanted to revisit.

Again I love this series, and frankly would love to hear about the New Years party, I honestly wouldn't have bothered commenting if I didn't like the overall story.

This was a great story, I have 2 comments though.

In the story you used dollars instead of pounds, I believe this takes place in the UK (you said London, I suppose that could be a US London, or London Ontario in Canada, but I assume you meant England) (this is an easy fix)

The other is (again assuming this is in England), most young people (in fact nor would most older people) who live in London wouldn't drive a car to a city centre shop.... traffic is mad, parking is expensive and there is an congestion charge... Public transport would be the way of choice. This obviously doesn't need to be changed, as it could happen, just public transport would be more believable, and frankly having to navigate the tube/busses in women's clothes in itself could add to humiliation... so just a thought if you wanted to revisit.

Again I love this series, and frankly would love to hear about the New Years party, I honestly wouldn't have bothered commenting if I didn't like the overall story.

This was a great story, I have 2 comments though.

In the story you used dollars instead of pounds, I believe this takes place in the UK (you said London, I suppose that could be a US London, or London Ontario in Canada, but I assume you meant England) (this is an easy fix)

The other is (again assuming this is in England), most young people (in fact nor would most older people) who live in London wouldn't drive a car to a city centre shop.... traffic is mad, parking is expensive and there is an congestion charge... Public transport would be the way of choice. This obviously doesn't need to be changed, as it could happen, just public transport would be more believable, and frankly having to navigate the tube/busses in women's clothes in itself could add to humiliation... so just a thought if you wanted to revisit.

Again I love this series, and frankly would love to hear about the New Years party, I honestly wouldn't have bothered commenting if I didn't like the overall story.

I loved it, and want more please. I've been waiting for a part 4 dealing with New Years for a couple of years now.

One other nit. Erica tells Joe and Kareem to make a woman out of her, while she still has the ball gag in her mouth.