All Comments on 'World Issues Project'

I really liked your story for its realism. It would be a fantasy for any man to live this tale, but the asides were well done and the epiloge fit in well. Hope it's a true story

I love that your main guy isn't some perfect person. When I think of sex I think of people and you hit that on the nose. As a younger person myself I love that your charicter has a family and social issues, to me thats erotica, not just porn.

Good stuff, Believable, too. I liked how you let the story build with a likeable main character, imperfect, much like most of us. The characters drifted apart at the end, but this too happens, and makes for a good ending...