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All Comments on 'World Travelers Ch. 07'

by Aaroneous

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Frankenstein1962Frankenstein19627 months ago

I will be waiting impatiently for the next series and adventure to begin. Cheers. Frankie

ITakePicturesITakePictures7 months ago

Glad to have you back writing! Your latest is your best yet!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I’m not sure what to think of that ending…

Is the idea he charms a new girl on every planet? While she is slower made nicer and more humble?

Or is the end game that they get together?

You did a great job getting us emotionally invested in David & Corin, to just have her dropped from the story and presumably replaced…. I’m not really sure what I feel now about this story.

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In an effort to expand my literary horizon, I just submitted the first part of a twelve chapter romance series. Give “Facets of Love” a read and let me know what you think.