All Comments on 'Worlds Apart Ch. 01'

Interesting story line. Last part was a but rushed I feel. Hopfully you will expand on it in the coming chapters. Like, how is it that his drawings are of a hero from another dimension and why is this hero him? Who is Eddy? Why does he keep pursuing a career that he obviously sucks at. He has the images in his head, but can't draw. I look forward to the next chapters to see if you answer all my and other readers questions

Thank you for sharing your story with us.

DJ

Enjoyed the first installment and will watch as you take it further.

Looking forward to how you develop your story and Characters.

Let's wait and see what will happen next.

I just love a good story and this sounds like it's gonna to be a good one.

but you are an idiot never writting more