All Comments on 'Worlds Apart Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
nice

but you are an idiot never writting more

dreamer3366dreamer3366over 6 years ago
Can't wait

I just love a good story and this sounds like it's gonna to be a good one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Let's wait and see what will happen next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
So many possibilities...

Enjoyed the first installment and will watch as you take it further.

Looking forward to how you develop your story and Characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Interesting

Interesting story line. Last part was a but rushed I feel. Hopfully you will expand on it in the coming chapters. Like, how is it that his drawings are of a hero from another dimension and why is this hero him? Who is Eddy? Why does he keep pursuing a career that he obviously sucks at. He has the images in his head, but can't draw. I look forward to the next chapters to see if you answer all my and other readers questions

Thank you for sharing your story with us.

DJ

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Hello, This is a PSA to those that enjoy my work. I will be retiring from this site soon. I toyed around with my unfinished stories and where to go with them. I have a friend that is willing to take them on, in addition to the ones he plans on writing. If interested, please f...

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