by jasliz
Didn’t like all of the cheesy King James English. Is that how one, in your mind, expresses adoration or worship? Really?
Your writing is among the very best here, as you always create provocative plots with compelling setups. BUT this story stops too soon -- or should I say it peters out? It begs for more, if only to wrap up her one-off experience more fully. Better yet would be a further elaboration of the central conceit, like having her experience other encounters and changing in her receptivity to being 'worshipped' by a cum bath, or whatever. Please consider extending the character, plot & their fertile ground for further invention!