by mklit74
Very erotic tale with most of the elements of a cock worshipping submissive: a massive cock, oral to completion, cum facials (love 'em), collar & leash, sex talk and lots of photos detailing his submission. That's just how I would like to do it. Continue writing please.
Great ride through the ecstasy of rough, forbidden love! Very well done.
From straight to cocksucker in a few short weeks, I think that it could happen. The ass to mouth scene was a little too much for me but all in all a nice tale. Could benefit from more detail.
What a Great and hot story. I just came by rereading and playing the story in my mind, Absolutely a Great Story.
GOOD STORY. I AM BOTTOM AND LOVED TO BE FUCKED BY A BIG COCK TOO. CONTACT ME TO: msmehser8@gmail.com
the story started out great- a previously staight dude seeing a magnificent cock and has no choice but to bend to its power and worship it. the guy with the big dick gets off on it because his cock is so potent it turns straight guys into cock slurpers----gives the straight guy a sense of power to have other guys on their knees worshipping his manhood- making him the alpha male.
but then you ruined it by having the cock sucker dress up like a girl- the big dick guy could already get any girl he wanted_ he wouldn't want a guy dressed up like an ugly girl---maybe the leash alone would have been cool--but the gender bending wasn't....and then you went and ruined it more by having fag guy say he loved big dick guy and then you made it even worse by having big dick guy say he loved fag guy back. that is an unlikely situation----it was about a straight guy letting a fag worship his dick- making him feel power__it wasn't about wanting a guy dressed as a girl and it definitely wasn't going to develop into love___fag guy should have stopped at loving big dick guy's dick and that's that.
altho it went way to fast and needs lots more chapters. erotic and I loved it. four stars
This story was a great turn on for me. I would love to have a cock that I could suck and worship anytime he wanted me to swallow his load for him.