All Comments on 'Worst Bachelor Party'

No harm, no foul

5 Stars. Damn!

Needs editing / proofreading. A couple times you used Jim’s name when you should have used Tom.

Proofreading would have made an otherwise lame story a little better - maybe gotten it up to a 3.

Many women like Iza get guys by using the "You're so big." line. She probably tells Jim the same thing

Cheating SLUT, I hope Jim finds out before it's too late.

Started out really good, ended piss poor :(.

Story was dumb. Iza was a slut. Jim was a jerk for bringing her. Tom was a rotten friend for fucking her.