All Comments on 'Worth Falling For'

Very good effort for a first story,well written and had a nice pace to it

A really nice story, would love to read more!

You paced it well and did good things with character development and plot twists. Looking forward to more work from you.

Great first story. When Tara was at the hospital with the hospice patient it really hit a nerve. Sex scene were artfully done. Looking forward to your next story.

Pretty good first effort. I loved the pace and the two characters. You could happliy leave it there but it would be interesting to see how they move forward as well. Thanks, really enjoyed it.

You wrote a really nice story. You did a good job developing your characters and it flowed really well. As another person commented you could end it here or take it further, either way you decide I’d like to read more from you.

Very good story, I began to feel the characters and move into the story as though I was one of them, this is why I read, so I can feel like a part of the story, I loved it thanks.

OMG this was a truly amazing story!

I’ve been to Auckland and I’ve read your first (? !!) story, and I have loved both experiences! More and more please. Your story is what my reading is for, and not the things I dislike. Could you please share some bio info so we can feel closer to you?

I got so turned on reading this it made me wish I was a girl with a pussy instead of a cock. You have to add another chapter telling us what happened once you were both naked in your bed.

It was so teal like I got thinking that it was a true story and actually happened between you two. This got a 5 star rating from me.

This was an awesome story. Very hot and sexy. Great job for a first time writing!

Wow!

Love your first effort. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel.

"Worth Falling For" flowed quite well as an introduction, and our quickly becoming delighted with the Aria / Tara characters. These 2-beautiful ladies had been best friends for several years, and really understood each other as someone they could trust unconditionally. This was a well written first chapter, with excellent background detail on how their friendship commenced, matured, and now becoming "Love" !! This the start of just a "lovely" lesbian Romance story.

Definitely Rated 5*-Stars & Am Excitedly Waiting For Ch. 02!!!

Real class! 5*

Sooo sweet! Absolute 5 stars.