All Comments on 'Worth the Wait'

Perhaps a little bit more editing might help but I did love the premise and your language use is great. A romantic story indeed- 5 stars!

loved the story. enough romance and love making, thanks

I recognised and loved the Australian perspective. Should be more of it!

with a well thought out thread and a nice balance of romance and eroticism. If you can find an editor who would help you make the story flow better and eliminate the tendency to make it like a newspaper report, that would be a plus. Keep writing.

Hmmm....You and qhml1 :+))

All parts tidied up ... with each its place by the end of your story!

Love the story elements in this one!

I should point out your long first page reads like

a treatment for a film script?

It doesn't light up until dialog shows up...:+))

But a 40 year old virgin who doesn’t even drive a car and crushes on a former student for two decades is not romantic, it’s creepy af.

As always, a fascinating story and so well-conceived. Good job again!

Mia was a whore, just another trailer park white sexcrazed white piece of trash

40yr old virgin - utter bulllshit