All Comments on 'Would You Like To Be Her?'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
So good

I wish I could have a beautiful woman like that massage me the way she did Cat. I was riveted on every word, every inch of Cat's body that was touched. This was foreplay at its best. Please write part two and tell us what happens when the two spend the night together. And yes, I "would like to be her"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Lovely

This was the sweetest, most erotic story that could be written about a woman's first time encounter with another woman. It flowed effortlessly and believably. The reader was never left with the feeling that the progression wasn't plausible in real life, as is so often the case. I found myself wanting to be her, even being a man.

EnglishvoyeurEnglishvoyeuralmost 10 years ago
Favourite

Yiu really are my favourite author Cat, Such beautiful, arousing stories that really put the reader there in the action. xx

theghostwritertheghostwriterabout 9 years ago

Yet another em Cat. You hve a unique style and you certainly make me wish I was female and being the subject of that massage

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Massage with feminine touch...

Wow! I am a new big fan, well petite fan. :-) First of your stories I have read and I was so pleasantly aroused. I actually related to this story in a different way. I was referred to a high-end "special spa" in a nearby Southern California beach community, by an older woman I met in a Yoga class. I was 20 years old and my expert masseuse was a tall older Asian woman. I suspected that I was younger than their normal clients, but felt rather flattered by the compliments on my blonde hair and long legs. My masseuse, Mai was the manager, who took all the "first time" customers. I shall never forget her slowness, awareness, and attention to my young body. Oh yes! :-) Catalina in California...

donnaeliza25donnaeliza25over 8 years ago
Beautiful

This story is so sensual and i wish i had a chance to give you a massage like that Cat. Even my massages with my friend have not got me as hot as reading about yours xxoo

IwannadoitnowIwannadoitnowover 7 years ago
You

No cunnilingus? I thought "you" would end up sitting on "our" face! That would have been delightful and would have been devoutly wished for if 'I" were "her."

Not crazy about stories told in the second person; it always ends up awkard to read.

selinastrattonselinastrattonabout 6 years ago
Oh gosh

That was wonderful

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

"Utterly Superb Writing"! Just visually picturing the entire story was a complete turn-on! Loved it so much. Wish it continued, "into the night" and further. Well done!

JoannePareJoanneParealmost 3 years ago

Dear Catherins, this story is so wonderful and sensual as the forst time one woman introduces the other to lesbian love. Hope youplan on having another part of this as youleft it with Catherine initins Sara to spend the night with her.

Joanne

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Cat your stories are very erotic and I only recently started reading them. The links were sent to me by an older woman I had been chatting with for several months. However, her intent played out with me being your stories Sarah and she being very much the experienced older woman masseuse-seducer. I turned 18 years-old, during the period we had chatted online. I sensed her nervousness about my actual age and I had always looked several years younger than I was. I provided her solid evidence that I was in fact 18 years-old. Karen was a 43 year-old divorced professional woman. When I sent her pictures of my petite 5’ 1” tall, 110 lb., 32B-22-32 young body; she admitted they titillated her. She explained she had never been with a girl as young as me. I told her I had only experienced some petting and fondling with an older neighborhood when I was 16 years-old. The girl had persuaded me to undress and masturbate as she watched and made herself cum. She was off to college days later, but my interest in older girls and women was ignited. Karen’s pictures were of her long-legged, voluptuous body, wearing only a bra and panties. I was admitted turned on by her pictures. I sent her teasing pictures of my petite; 5’ 1” tall, 105 lb., 32B-22-32 body. I had my long black-hair in pigtails, wearing a partially open short white blouse. The blouse exposed my flat-toned stomach and one of my breasts with a protruding nipple. I sat on a chair wearing a short black skirt and no panties, with my legs spread to show her my thin covering of pubic hair. She wanted me at her Condo the next weekend and her detailed sexual intentions verified I should expect much more than a massage. My first titillating experience with Karen totally exceeded my expectations and exhausted my sexual energy. Evidently her work demands had caused her to go without sex for longer than she ever had. Karen’s intent and craving to satisfy my young body was amazing. She was insatiable when using our bodies together for mutual satisfaction. I fulfilled a fantasy for her, but she awakened and satisfied needs and desires I could not have imagined. Thanks Cat; Tiny Tina, in Carlsbad, CA

sarah4gurlzsarah4gurlzabout 1 year ago

Beautifully paced and deliciously erotic story, narrated with great style and flair!

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