by Thomas_Lodge
The coach is hysterical! Scott is so gullible he really is comical too. The writing is excellent. I can clearly see these conversations and the manipulations. I love this story, although I think it is more comical than believable but still very entertaining. More chapters please!
I DON'T CARE, I need scott to either successfully stand up to ranson and/or FUCK HIM HARDDDD!!!
It's a great story, don't change a thing. It's such a different paced story, long and slow-developing, but different is good. I can't wait for more.
Same, keep up the great work! Stick to your gut and your plans. This journey is what's most interesting for Scott, doesnr make sense rhat hed suddenly fuck the coach lmao. It's the opposite really