All Comments on 'Wrestling with Mother and Auntie'

You still need to know when to use apostrophes like in "It's even more erotic being my nephews." It should be nephew's as in belonging to the nephew. By adding just an s it means she has more than one nephew as in nephews.

Can't wait for chapter 2

Thank you so much Mr Anonymous grammar corrector. I totally get it, but it’s mainly typed on a tablet or a phone and these things don’t lend themselves to corrections and are missed in spite of re reading several times.

I rather have constructive criticism on the erotic plot or content.

But thanks anyway.

Unbelievably good, I was hard reading this.

Can't wait for round 3