All Comments on 'Writing a Story for Literotica'

Not 5 but certainly a 4.5. I was jerking off reading it. There is an awkwardess in the writing, imagine using 'he' instad of 'her dad' or 'dad.' It would have have flowed better. I felt like I was being hit over the head by 'Dad.' But then that's me and I did cum reading it. Thanks for the original story line.

I tend to feel that using dad or her dad makes it no doubt an incest story WOW! What a GOOD story it is.

So where is mom, she came up once in the story. Is mom around, does she know that her daughter writes incest stories? Does mom know that her daughter is reading incest stories? Does mom know notice any of these feelings that her husband and daughter are feeling for each other?

A story within a story that merges into one story. I am almost confused at what I just wrote but I think you mean what I know.

Two stories in one. How incredible!

This story may not be for those lacking mental abilities in the heat of the moment, but it's amazing for those of us to whom it's a turn-on! 5 stars and a favorite for me!

Enjoy this story but u need a chapter to include the wife into all the action.

VARY GOOD AS A MATTER OF FACT THAT WAS GREAT I LOVE IT VARY INTERESTING HOW YOU DID IT .................................R...............................

This is the way father/daughter sex is so wonderful to do! To capture the feel and the thought of making love to one's own daughter you have done it once again. Thank you! Five stars!

This story is so uniquely metarotica. It's like a movie about making the very movie you're watching i.e. Adaptation, or a play about the making of the play you're actually attending i.e. Title of Show. Very intelligent, abstract, post modern. You could write a whole series of people writing to literotica with different settings and outcomes. Thank you for this quality concept.

One of my favorite stories so far. Thanks for the submission.

:-)

Now she needs to have mom help her write a story !