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though the ending could use a little more work, details on the backgrounds of your characters would help your readers to relate easier.

What subject does the main character teach, if she is a teacher, what sort of school? high school? middle? Does she know the students at all? has she seen them before?

I'd like to know more about your lead, and the students, but the sex and voyeurism were great

Very great!

don't agree with other commentators that this needs more detail, thought it had a real sense of urgency and was very vivid. i thought it was really sexy

This story had so many of my fantasies. I loved it.

I've read this many times and every time I am so aroused at the raw lust, desire and sexual urge. One of my favourite stories.