All Comments on 'Writing Lessons'

I've read this many times and every time I am so aroused at the raw lust, desire and sexual urge. One of my favourite stories.

This story had so many of my fantasies. I loved it.

don't agree with other commentators that this needs more detail, thought it had a real sense of urgency and was very vivid. i thought it was really sexy

Very great!

I'd like to know more about your lead, and the students, but the sex and voyeurism were great

though the ending could use a little more work, details on the backgrounds of your characters would help your readers to relate easier.

What subject does the main character teach, if she is a teacher, what sort of school? high school? middle? Does she know the students at all? has she seen them before?