All Comments on 'Writing Sexuality 02'

Beautiful and so, so arousing. I'm looking forward to the next part! Please, write more....

Is it what I think it’s going to happen? Can’t wait for how that will unfold.. Every scene is written in incredible detail; hoo lordie got me entranced! Amazing work!

Even better than Chapt 1. The D/s scene was really well written and very believable. Can't wait to see what Chapt 3 brings with the wife getting involved.

5/5

J

“Lead the way” — perfect closing line. Fun to imagine where, especially in light of intensely sensual, highly erotic scene between Beth and Rosa. And once again not surprising when Elle enters the picture; after all, when you mentioned almost in passing in the first chapter that Beth was married, you aroused more than just curiosity. Remain intrigued by the course Rosa is TAing. You share nothing biographically but can easily see a vividly erotic imagination.

Ok, it's official. You have now met the bar for keeping me interested in a story long term which is make that second installment good. Chapter one was good, but this is better. And it ends on a note that makes me really want to know what happens next.

This slave wishes he was Rosa so he can be used and abused by Beth and Her wife

So two sexual predators looking for a fuck toy slave.

Loving this. The characters are so well-developed for such short stories. I really enjoy your writing style and am looking forward to your future works.

Power dynamics are wonderful and you captured them perfectly. Your emphasis on Rosa’s uncertainty kept me on edge. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

Amazing!!!! The best story I’ve read in a long time. You have such an engaging and effortless writing style and I’m excited to read what happens next.

Please please tell me there will be continuation

Very interesting begining. It could go in so many directions. I am hooked for part 3....is it coming soon?

There's no part 3??? You're killing me. Fantastic story.

Please write a part 3 i beg you

also commenting here to beg for a part 3

really good so far 5stars please give us a part three soon.

Pappasleaze!

Please tell me there will be more? These characters are fantastic. Beth is so 🥵. And its incredibly well written. You really do have a talent for writing and i'd love to read more! I'm begging you to write more of their story.

Just commenting to say that this series is the best thing I've ever read on Literotica, and that I made an account on here after Part 2 was published specifically to follow you (after years of lurking!). I really hope you publish a Part 3 someday, but thank you no matter what for your wonderful writing

A great beginning but, when do you release the rest. Is there a further dynamic?

I would love to read more.

Regards and congratulations, so far.

K.

Oh my god dude, this is seriously the best thing I've ever read here or anywhere else for that matter (in the way of erotica at least). Holy shit. I am so excited to read more.