All Comments on 'Written in the Stars Ch. 01'

Apologies for not placing the slow-burn warning at the start of the chapter, an edit has been submitted to change this.

1/12/18 so this southern hemisphere yarn fits my need for nostalgia very well.

33 degrees Celsius in Melbourne today just home from sunning w my aged self in the park speedos even. Old men have no shame.

Bush fire action plans in rural areas

On to chapter 2

djb

Thank you for your comment. I (Liv) am a Sydney girl myself, so it is lovely to be able to write something for those of us down under. I'm glad you're able to enjoy your speedos. Our weather in Sydney is all over the place. Swim-worthy one day, need your jacket umbrella the next.

Here's hoping you enjoy the rest of the story.

Xx

Very nostalgic-kind of backstory, where you excel at describing the smells, sounds and energy typical of a family BBQ. You nailed the kid's behavior, ancillary characters we should acquaint ourselves with and expect you to bring along with your story.

Nothing wrong with a slow-burn story, as it will just make them having sex sizzle! Obvious Vanessa is looking forward to seeing Nate--despite her protesting. Will read more! 4