All Comments on 'Wrong Number'

There's definitely another chapter in this. I want to hear about the grief the ex and the principal get from the school board. Thanks for a really fun story.

Yep! Write that puppy!

This was kinda fun. Keep on going.

You can't tell the players without a scorecard!

This would could have been posted in Humor. Living well is indeed the best revenge. A second chapter could be fun.

yuk

Always welcome

It’s obvious this story hasn’t reached the end.

waiting for part 2

Who calls anyone on a landline anymore? How does she have his home number but not his name of marital status? Why would he need a detective to find out about his cheating wife?

Honestly, these are more important questions.

You got definitely live up to your name CrazyDave. That was an insane mess, but welcome back.

You have plenty of sex, but we really need to see the ex get humiliated or burned.

Thanks and keep writing.

God Almighty this was just wretchedly bad

Nothin like a good peter beater once and a while

But thanks for the effort.

You could improve the story with a little less fucking and much more burning of the ex-wife and her boyfriends....IMO

Write it. Write it. Write it.

Write the next chapter! Come on man... it should ready be published! Hahahahaha

Seriously --

Ms. Jennifer needs to join the harem and Gail's mom, and Triss's mom, and Wanda's mom and the ex needs to see -- by seeing all the hot women who are now in his life -- just how badly she screwed up thinking he would spend the rest of his days pining away for her! And he really does need to send her a thank you card for doing what she did!

It was not good enough for another chaoter.. unless he destroys the other guys

So over the top, that anybody who takes it seriously needs to get laid. Just enjoy it for what it is, a pure fantastical wish fulfillment.

Thanks for sharing. 5*

It seemed like a realistic, even if a bit over the top, story about an ex husband’s mindset. The rest was an adolescent fantasy.

No pretensions here at all about plot or reality, so the only question at the end is really whether or not you're going to continue to amuse yourself. I like stroke stories as much as anyone, but this one was more than a little over the top

How have I not seen your stories before? You are funny AF. And you should absolutely add another chapter or three. The slut ex and the principal. Gerald. Jennifer. Jennifer and Molly. Triss, Wanda, and Gail. Gail's mom. Lots of options. Whoever said erotica cant be humorous has just been proven wrong. 5 stars for you, buddy.

Jedd

This guy is a creep, no wonder the wife cheated on him.

The story was going great, until you brought in the teenagers in. You Could have burnt the ex wife & one of the lovers and found a new love. As it is nothing happens to the ex wife. The new possible love gets basically dropped from the plot line (remember the title "wrong number" what happened?)

Well you doing pretty good, as this is the first story of yours I didn't like. As they say you can't please all of the people all of the time.

Looking forward to your next story.

You never disappoint me and I love the craziness.

Just nothing remotely resembling reality here.

Writing style makes name seem very appropriate. I enjoyed your story.

Tried starting, but lost md with the dashes. What do thry mean?

Like how you knew what readers would say before you post the story.

What a load of crap.

I got a great Laugh from this One .. Keep in writing

Well isn’t this something.Guess were to suppose the wife is the terrible one so hubby gets couple of young Purdue’s to play with and a couple more hotties. However in reality he is the assholebof this story who neglected his wife for months but still would not accept any blame calling everything she said were lies. However from what I read they weren’t. Terrible ending with the creepy husband getting everything.

Did he ever send the photos of his ex wife and school principal to the school board?.

Please do write the next chapter for " WRONG NUMBER" What a cool story!!!

This was a great story. Please write a sequel.

great story, is there a part 2 ???

Love the story, has to be a 2nd chapter. AAAAA+++++

While the stories from the author are entertaining, they pretty much have all the same elements and same ending just diff characters. I hope he adds more to the ending or btb or even dialogue from the cheating spouse. Reminds me of the movie Hangover but only the fun parts w/ no real ending

You have to write another chapter. This is too good to end.

Yes write the next chapter of Wrong Number.

Next chapter please Dave, you write some really great stories, this is one them.

More please

5/5

I'm not against stories with this type of plot, but honestly, it was horribly written. Once he met the girls it just went so fast that any suspension of disbelief went out the window.

I Always love your over the top stories

Why average!

Timeline you had in story. Wife cheating and you knew and didn't do anything about it until after heart attack.

That to me is a wimpy cuckold. He recovers from that disease therefore raised to average

Next chapter for sure!!!

Good story but spoilt by the emphasis on anal sex and the ass to mouth pov

Another chapter please

please continue. having 5 women pregnant would be hot.

meh....sex mechanics and weak characters

How old are you? Seriously...I had less puerile fantasies when I was 14...