All Comments on 'Wrongfully Accused Ch. 01-06'

Looking forward to reading more of this story!

Awesome story. Also looking forward to the next chapters

Look like Ronnie got a crush and Kelly too for Jason Solace, including becoming a new rich Bachelor Mr. Archer persona as old lady Carlie gave him a

million-dollar compensation (as she said he wasn't no fool either.) considering Ronnie & Jason strained history by association (which isn't going to heal by itself either. ) He at best tolerates her at best for now.

Including a lot of old friends and acquaintances coming up out the woodwork from Jason Solace's past possibly. my best speculation guesses. As exactly no saint either nor is he pulling any punches in his somewhat honest opinion after his prison experience .

A sexy legal thriller with smut of the wrongfully accused Jason Solace new second chance.

Continue on

Catch Ya later

Cheers!

3 stars - the first page was not a shining example and I almost stopped reading. Then I skimmed a bit and the writing seemed to settle down, plus the story got interesting enough to read to the end.

Please take more time to edit, spell and grammar check - especially your story tags - what is 'masteration'?

I hope Jason ends up with all three of these ladies for the rest of his life.

Nice start!

Thank you for abbreviating the exposition. Starting when he left prison with brief bits of backstory was a relief.

5*

This feels like the beginning of a truly amazing story. Please keep up the good work

Great story. Can’t wait for the rest. Only issue was with the names. You switched between James and Jason several times. Just something to look at for future chapters.

Nice story, need to get an editor though. Keep up the good work.

Great start. 5stars!

Gonna be interesting to see how his hunt for the son goes, or what he foes to him in the end. All i see is pain of sone sort.

Regards

Stiixx

Perfect.... we most have more

Good story!

4

Excellent story so far! Going to check out more of this Authors stories now. 5 BIG FAT STARS!

Great start! Keep it coming. 5 stars... although no one I have ever heard says Mr. Governor. Still your story was excellent despite any errors.

Good Beginning, a little of a rocky start. Mainly keeping track of it all. If you are using an editor it always takes a bit to synch up with them. 😁. It just felt a little jumbled in my head. Possibly use a bit more specific details for each character to keep a better mental picture of them? That's just me though.

Honestly you have a good flow in your writing. Used some classic tropes but did it in a fairly refreshing way. Also tackled some more mature subject matter that cause nasty emails to get sent to people. Lol.

Keep writing. You will only improve. If you think you are good now, wait until you have even more stories written and then read your older works for perspective.

All this to say, thank you for writing and keep going. It will get better and worse but it is worth it.

Sincerely,

Payenbrant

Can't wait for the next part

bravo, amazing story. cant wait for the next chapter....wow

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Most excellent!

I am entranced by the story.

Interesting story thus far.

First off, I like the story. It falls into the cliché of someone wronged and becoming dangerous, and it also features the problem solver of coming into money by some means, but I still like it. There are some issues with grammar and instances where spellcheck has been used to correct and the wrong word used. The real issue I have is the switch between the protagonists name of Jason and James, sometimes within the same paragraph. There are tools built into word processing programs to replace words with others, so switching out James would be easy if it was caught.

I was surprised that no one else has commented yet, but maybe it's only a certain percentage or readers that does that? Oh well, keep up the good work, and watch out for those errors! :P

"The first 48 hours" is a terrible synopsis; I have absolutely no idea if I want to read this story or not.

Wow, you made the gay guy a bigot, very progressive of you.

had to bring your lefty politics in. get it straight left wingers are the haters. look who is rioting and looting. also no tolerance for free speech. 1* for bringing your twisted politics in to your otherwise good story.