All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 30: Training 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Still loving it!

5 again! I hope we get to read more of his wonderful journey!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
He's such an moron

It's impossible to enjoy this mess. His actions are so over-the-top idiotic it completely ruins the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Moron ? Yes .....

The other members had 3 , 4 , 6 training sessions .

Bill seems to need dozens .

The series would have been more dramatic if his doubts

had occurred earlier , say around Ch.15 .

Then an inclination to withdraw , a less one-sided scenario ,

a sense of conflict , would have provided interest .

By the way , does he ever speak to a male ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Who the fuck is Chandra?

I'm losing track.

gupiaogupiaoabout 8 years agoAuthor
Chandra ---

lives across the hall in Bill's dorm. She was introduced in Ch.24: The Psych Test, and also appeared in Ch.27: The Private Session.

Jonthemon88Jonthemon88almost 8 years ago
Diane

I think Diane is a little to controlling of Jordan. She wants to keep her for herself but Jordan is having new feeling for bill and that is scaring her.

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