All Comments on 'WWT: Just Beneath the Surface'

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenabout 4 years ago
Its nice when

The eldritch horrors enjoy the pleasure they inflict, and value that beyond the base need of their purpose. Definitely interested in seeing more of "I" and his furlough into battle, as it were. At least with the tone set in this chapter ^.^

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Fantastic piece, over way too soon. Hopefully the next installment is a bit longer

Cherri_TartCherri_Tartabout 4 years ago
Favorite story ever!

Loved this - really, there's not enough really good tentacle stories out there. Ok, not really good. Amazing! :)

PussyFeasterPussyFeasterabout 4 years ago

Great spin on a tentacle story. Can't wait to see more of this series! (And I hope we get to see the consequences of the seed left inside Rachel... ;-))

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