All Comments on 'X-Rated Xmas'

I read it with enthusiasm and got to the end thinking it was imbalanced. Too quick without character motivation. No angst.

All I want to know is where do you get that pixie dust. Terrific story; hope you do well in the contest.

I absolutely love this story. It's deranged, funny and sexy. I'd love to see a sequel. Might become my favorite Christmas story ever.

I don't know what anonymous is talking about, great story, great imagination. More Please!

you let your imagination run wild but not to wild maybe even beliveable great story

Really enjoyed this story. Good luck in the contest.

Very good story .In my opinion it going to take a lot to beat it . Good luck and thanks for the holiday story .....

I stopped reading after the mother started sucking the what i'm guessing was the snowman .

Personally, I though it was hilarious - all these mixups and shit and everybody way too horny to care. I loved it!

Great bit of sexual farce.

Fantasy, guilt free sex with humour.

Christmas is truly the season for giving and cumming.

Great story; really hawt.

Wonderful story. A lot of fun and fantasy. Using the Christmas magic and Frosty themes really flowed well for a "family" story. Good luck in the contest. Don't let negative comments dissuade your writing, this was great escapism.

you've written some great stories and this one is imaginative and fucking hot. 5 stars. can't wait for more. thanks.

Really enjoyed how you tied the story all together with mix-up after mix-up. It was a lot of fun to read....in multiple ways.

I can honestly offer no complaints. It was so much more then the average story, because you had actually planned out a way that it could all happen by accident (with a little help from a snowman).

Bravo

Exceptionally literate for a change. That makes a huge difference as I enjoy your prose without the jarring misspellings and stupid grammatical errors that mar so many of these shared fantasies. Your scenario is just as unlikely as most of these stories, but you write it so well that is easy to suspend my disbelief and enjoy the ride. Congratulations! Five stars!

Finally best story I have read. ..I will continue to look for your work. ....5 all the way. It keeps you in wanting more through out the whole story. ...Bravo!!!!!

I like the story a lot but thought it was a bit choppy. Several times I got lost trying to figure out which character was in play. I want to read the rest of your stories now.

That was great. Erotic but funny. Loved it

That was a GREAT story! Im def checking out the rest of your stories now.

I could write a long comment regarding my opinion of the amazingly written story, but I will just agree with Anon, Good Job. He wrote a great review.

im confused.. too much chars.. i lost the track

2/5

I loved the story but I think it would have been better if they remembered it all

I could write for hours but not sum up how amazing this story is. Erotic yet humerous.

What if there was a security camera video taping the living room and Lauren's boyfriend and the rest of Lauren's family reviews the digitally recorded security tape from that night after her boyfriend insists remembering her mom sucking his cock and getting caught by Lauren? Imagine the sexy fun that could ensure from video taped evidence that what they had thought were dreams was actually real.

Please write another story like this, i literally cannot find any stories similar in any way.

I felt like I was watching a movie: I could picture every scene and it was not only hot, but funny! The hottest part was definitely the scene in the car. Hopefully this will go far in the contest.

Great story! Would like to read another like it.

Excellent story. Kept me hard and wondering what was going to happen next.

It was like some of the English comedies with misdirect.

It would make an amazing porn movie

I have been trying to write mixed up stories like this but they are always rubbish. This however worked, and worked well. I had to go back several times to check who was doing what as there was lots to take in and found it easy to lose my way.

Well done, I hope you don't mind if I use this as a base to rewrite one of my stories, which ironically has the same family group but the snowman is a real guy.

Don't worry about the Anon 'grammer' comments, yes there are a couple of errors but so what? they didn't harm the story, I don't know why people get so hung up on it.

5* from me

It was superb! The mix-up was really well arranged. The best thing about your stories are the dialogues. They are so natural and relatable. This was no exception.. Loved it.

Although I am a little bit of disappointed because I was hoping for Tyler x Katy from the very start, yet it didn't happen. But that's minuscule.

Great story.. Keep on writing..